So… I’ve abandoned “22 Panels that Always Works for a Comic About Justice” and “A Brief History of Dark Town.” I’m continuing “The Many Faces of Justice from 5-14.
The 22 Panel project probably would have worked better if I did the whole thing in a single post. Now it feels like bunch of punch lines without jokes.
The history of the Dark Town would be better peppered within the main story rather than a dedicated, dry, expository chapter.
i had a dedicated dry expository this morning. i should probably visit the doctor
They are all interesting experiments/directions. I don’t think any were bad though.
I’d guess, since you have humor focus, it’s just important that each entry/day has humor.
… I feel like you’re skipping your trademark humor approach, which is repetition catch phrases. The “big dramatic look” (which I think you also do well) seems to work better in video.
blah blah. i’ll shut up now.